Novik, Naomi: (06) Tongues of Serpents

Tongues of Serpents is the most recent book in Naomi Novik’s Temeraire series. I enjoyed it, but those who aren’t delighted by the changes Novik is making to 19th-century history are likely to find it harder going.

This is the one where they go to Australia (rather like Empire of Ivory is the one where they go to Africa). The opening section is set in the British colony of New South Wales, which, as Patrick O’Brian’s Aubrey-Maturin series had led me to expect, is quite a miserable place. Then there’s an extended travel section, which goes faster the second time around, when I knew that (small spoiler, ROT13) gurl raq hc pebffvat gur ragver pbagvarag, and the denouement.

This book has two terrific reveals, some exciting action scenes, and multiple political/worldbuilding developments that had me wriggling with delight. But it also has a lot of cheerlessness and not much happening, particularly in the middle travel section. And I continue to feel that the secondary characters are underdeveloped. Previously I was thinking that an omniscient viewpoint would help, à la the Aubrey-Maturin books, but now I think that instead, it’s not the type of viewpoint but the choice of viewpoint characters: Laurence and Temeraire are just not going to notice enough to give me a rounded perspective on most of those around them.

Finally, there are three more books in the series. As a result, I don’t mind the emotional state that Laurence is left in, but other people have had different reactions.

In short: it’s a Temeraire book, with a little more of the weaknesses of the series than strengths. If you’ve been reading, that probably tells you enough of what you want to know.

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Duane, Diane: (109) A Wizard of Mars

I’m trying a new tactic on my backlog: a fifteen-minute timer. Most days I can manage fifteen minutes, after all, and even if I can’t dispose of one book in fifteen minutes, I can come back to it the next day.

The first book is one I actually just finished, Diane Duane’s A Wizard of Mars. This is the most recent book in her Young Wizards series and is, as the title suggests, the one in which all the comments about Kit and Nita doing something-or-other on Mars finally resolve into a plot.

This book is doing two things, it seems to me, and unfortunately I don’t care much about either of them. First, it’s considering Mars’ place in Western mythology through, in part, pastiches of classic stories about Mars, and that is not a topic that really grabs me. Second, it’s considering the ever-popular question of exactly what Nita and Kit’s relationship is, which is (a) not something I can bring myself to get worked up about and (b) something that’s been hanging out there since book two or so (this is book nine) and thus feels like something that is past due, already. Which is not really fair, because the series doesn’t span that much time in the characters’ lives, and it’s not the characters’ fault that I’ve been reading about them for at least a decade. Nevertheless.

Exacerbating the problem are the things this book is not doing, naming dealing with Wizards at War in any substantial way. The most obvious is the gaping plot question that Wizards left hanging, but I’m also waiting for a good payoff to Nita’s new abilities, because otherwise the entire series is going to feel massively imbalanced to me.

There are still sense-of-wonder moments and interesting characters and neat worldbuilding bits, but on the whole this wasn’t a book for me.

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