Marske, Freya: Cinder House

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Freya Markse’s Cinder House came out last week and is a book I liked very much, thus writing it up while it’s timely and as an antidote to frustration posting!

This is a novella retelling of Cinderella in which Ella is a ghost embodied in her house, and is forced to labor for her stepmother and stepsisters because damage to the house pains her. To me, it was exactly the right length, which is a common difficulty with novellas. I can see that people might want more of various things, but I thought the book did an excellent job of conveying what was happening outside of Ella’s point of view; so while I wouldn’t have minded reading those conversations etc., it would have made it a much different book, and I’m happy to hope that people write them for Yuletide. And like Marske’s other books, the prose, characterization, and romance are all great.

With regard to the romance, I’m going to put something behind clickable text because it’s the kind of spoiler that is also an enticement.

This is a spoiler for the resolution of the romance portion of the book:

I absolutely delighted in the way that the book refuses for an instant to entertain a love triangle between Ella, the prince, and the princess he’s entering into an arranged marriage with. Nope! Straight to polyamory, do not pass Go, do not collect $200.

I don’t want to say too much else about the book because it is short and I liked the experience of it unfolding, but I think it’s fair to say that it’s got a great angry protagonist and that it’s interested in exploring gender and abuse. If you like fairy tale retellings and/or Gothics and/or Marske’s other works, definitely check it out.

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Fitzgerald, F. Scott: The Great Gatsby

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I did not, actually, read F. Scott Fitzgerald’s The Great Gatsby immediately after Swordspoint, but I promised to end this batch of updates on a positive note, so I’m moving this post out of chronological order.

Yes, somehow I got through an American education without having ever read The Great Gatsby. I’d been meaning to, especially after Readercon this year. When our local theater sent me an email saying that a ballet adaptation of Gatsby was coming last month, I decided to give myself a hard deadline by buying tickets.

Unfortunately, I hated every single minute of reading this book—which I did twice, as I do for many books, and especially ones I want to be sure I’m giving a fair shake. Everyone in it is horrible; it’s crashingly obvious in a really tedious way; the plot makes no sense whatsoever; and the narrator is deeply oblivious to his own faults and never changes. (You know I love an unreliable narrator! But it turns out that I need the unreliability to matter; I’m not even sure that the book realizes that Nick is unreliable.) I do recognize that people find the prose beautiful, but it did not click for me.

It was an interesting experience because, like Les Misérables and Moby-Dick, I somehow did not know the ending going in. I knew that it was about rich people, class differences, and the narrator being a fish out of water; and—because of two of the many books that have been released since it went into the public domain—one character could be interpreted as maybe not white and the narrator could be interpreted as maybe queer. Which definitely flagged for me every time Jordan’s skin is described as brown (many) and that extremely remarkable ellipsis: "… I was standing beside his bed and he was sitting up between the sheets, clad in his underwear, with a great portfolio in his hands."

Finally, the reason I said up front that I didn’t read this right after Swordspoint is that its "these people are bad, the end" reminded me of that book, possibly because Kushner had said she liked Gatsby at Readercon. To be clear, however, Swordspoint has a morally coherent view of why its bad people are bad, which is not something I would say about Gatsby.

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Kushner, Ellen: Swordspoint

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So, naturally, after reading Swordcrossed, I reread Ellen Kushner’s Swordspoint, which I hadn’t liked very much when I read it back in the day because the swordsman’s boyfriend was so annoying.

I did like it better this time around, partly because the annoying boyfriend (Alec) actually takes up much less page space than he did in my memory. And I found him, and Richard’s relationship with him, less annoying because I saw better what their deal was.

However, I still found it kind of a weird shaggy book. There’s the Alec/Richard thread, and then there’s power-hungry nobles being manipulative, the upshot of which, as far as I could tell, is that being power-hungry is bad and exercising power over other people is bad, the end. Though we get points-of-view from various other characters involved in the manipulations (hence less Alec than I remembered), the resolution of it nevertheless felt incomplete. I think it would be, belatedly, an example of a work that did not cohere for me. But it was useful rereading it.

Finally, I need to note that back in the day, everyone always quoted the book’s second paragraph, and it is so telling that they never quoted the next:

Let the fairy tale begin on a winter’s morning, then, with one drop of blood new-fallen on the ivory snow: a drop as bright as a clear-cut ruby, red as the single spot of claret on the lace cuff. And it therefore follows that evil lurks behind each broken window, scheming malice and enchantment; while behind the latched shutters the good are sleeping their just sleeps at this early hour in Riverside. Soon they will arise to go about their business; and one, maybe, will be as lovely as the day, armed, as are the good, for a predestined triumph…

But there is no one behind the broken windows; only eddies of snow drift across bare floorboards. The owners of the coats of arms have long since abandoned all claims to the houses they crest, and moved up to the Hill, where they can look down on all the city. No king rules them any more, for good or ill. From the Hill, Riverside is a tiny splotch between two riverbanks, an unsavory quarter in a prosperous city. The people who live there now like to think of themselves as evil, but they’re really no worse than anyone else. And already this morning more than one drop of blood has been shed.

(I’ve never read either of the sequels; on looking at them and reading some of the short fiction set in the same world, I’ve decided that I’m not going to read The Fall of the Kings, because I don’t actually want a heavily mythic story of magic in this setting. I do plan to eventually read The Privilege of the Sword, however.)

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Marske, Freya: Swordcrossed

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I feel bad about dusting off the booklog just to work off my frustrations, so here’s some relatively quick notes about other books, which will ultimately end on something both positive and—for a change—timely.

First: a standalone from Freya Marske, Swordcrossed. This is a romance novel that is fantasy solely by virtue of being in a secondary world. One of the guys on the cover is the oldest child of a family of wool merchants; the business is not doing well, so he’s going to marry a very nice rich woman. The other guy is the duellist he hires to be his best man, to handle any challenges at the wedding … and also pressures into giving him sword lessons on the side, because the duellist scammed him the night before. Sparks fly, etc.

I enjoyed this very much. None of the emotional beats surprised me, but they didn’t need to, because they were arrived at in very satisfying fashion; and a few of the plot beats did, which was fun. The details of the worldbuilding were well-done, including the religion, and there were lots of cahoots; I reread the last few chapters for the fun of seeing it all fall into place.

Anyway, I finished this and thought, "oh, it’s no-magic fantasy like Swordspoint," and then somehow took several hours to realize that it was almost certainly directly in conversation with Swordspoint because of, you know, the swordfights?! And the central m/m relationship? So that was what I read next.

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Clarke, August: Metal from Heaven

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August Clarke’s Metal from Heaven opens like this:

Know I adore you. Look out over the glow. The cities sundered, their machines inverted, mountains split and prairies blazing, that long foreseen Hereafter crowning fast. This calamity is a promise made to you. A prayer to you, and to your shadow which has become my second self, tucked behind my eye and growing in tandem with me, pressing outwards through the pupil, the smarter, truer, almost bursting reason for our wrath. Do not doubt me. Just look. Watch us rise as the sun comes up over the beauty. The future stains the bleakness so pink. When my violence subsides, we will have nothing, and be champions. In the chasms wheat spikes and poppies will grow. Rarely is the future so immediate and tangible. Bless our triumph! How small you seem. How small you were. Remember?

And this is one of the things I liked about it, and one of the things I found so frustrating that I had to scrape out a little time to write it up.

So this is secondary world fantasy set during an industrial revolution. Our narrator, Marney Honeycutt, saw her entire community massacred because they tried to unionize over conditions at the ichorite factory. Ichorite, the titular metal, gives some of the people who handle it seizures and hallucinations. Marney is one of these lustertouched; she, however, is also able to manipulate ichorite, which she discovers when she flees the city and falls in with lesbian communist bandits.

Marney comes to adulthood among the lesbian communist bandits’ community. Her goal in life is to kill the industrialist who ordered the massacre; to get close to him, and also to protect the community, she ends up masquerading as an aristocrat to participate in a competition that the industrialist’s daughter is running to find herself a wife.

(The dating competition, which is basically a reality TV show except without the TV show part, doesn’t start until about 45% in. However, it is in the jacket copy, so I’ve decided it’s not a spoiler and regardless useful to know—partly because I was startled as heck when I came to it. (If I’d read the jacket copy, which I often don’t, I’d forgotten that part.))

Going back to the opening. I love first-person direct address narration, of course, and while the prose isn’t going to be to everyone’s taste, I quite enjoyed it. And the end wraps back around to this opening in a way I found genuinely beautiful.

However, I can only characterize the overall story of the book as, "what if the violent overthrow of capitalism and industrialism ("cities sundered" etc.), except only the bad people die?"

Unfortunately, this does not make sense even within the text of the book: the problems it acknowledges, it handwaves away in single sentences. And it ignores many more.

I admit that I’m allergic to speculative fiction that set up extremely clear analogies to real-world injustices, and then solve those injustices through means that only work because it’s speculative fiction. Here, it was impossible not to think of ichorite as oil throughout most of the book, and then the analogy broke down because it’s fantasy—which it’s allowed to be! There’s nothing intrinsically wrong with that! I just don’t like it.

So my reaction to the overall story is certainly colored by that. And it’s possible that I would be more charitable to the plot holes and handwaving about only the bad people dying if there were fewer overall plot holes and handwaving. There are a lot of things in this book that do not make any sense, and the cumulative effect was ultimately too much for me. Unfortunately, I suspect not.

Besides the prose and the plot, the other thing I noted about this book is that it’s 95% lesbians by volume. Specifically, butch and femme lesbians; the book’s very interested in how that involves gender as well as sexuality. That’s all great. There is a point, however, where a character breaks down gender in a speech that felt like a mouthpiece for the narrative:

“We have five genders recognized within the Splendid Fraternal Federation of the Crimson Archipelago. You have two. Precision becomes difficult.”

Where to even begin. “Five?”

“Mhm. There’s penetrating men, that’s [character], penetrated men, that’s me, the same division for women, and then those for whom penetration isn’t applicable, which is all children, all priests, a fair number of others disinterested for whatever reason. Penetrators are closer in gender to each other than they are to those penetrated and vice versa.”

Regardless of whether this character was actually speaking truth about this world, the remark did underline for me that the book has many lesbians, a few gay men, a handful of heterosexuals; no trans people and no bisexuals. The "about the author" uses they/he pronouns for Clarke, so I think it reasonable to assume that this focus was deliberate, not the result of unfamiliarity with the spectrum of human gender and sexuality. And like with the fantasy nature of ichorite, this is a thing a book is allowed to do! However, as a queer woman, I was not expecting to feel so alienated from a book so intensely focused on queer women.

(Edit: it’s been pointed out to me that there’s a strong possibility that one character is bisexual.)

(Also, in the aftermath of a fantasy Roman-or-Etruscan Empire, there are only white people. A single character has a "brown" face; she is from a "far-off" country "across the water.")

Finally, this book feel so emphatically post-Broken Earth trilogy that I was shocked not to see it in the acknowledgments; and further shocked that I couldn’t think of other works that were similarly post-Broken Earth. Suggestions welcomed! (I was also surprised that it’s been so long since Harrow the Ninth came out that it could appear in the acknowledgments of a book published last year. The inexorable linear progress of time, sigh.)

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Cherryh, C.J.: Cyteen; 40,000 in Gehenna; Downbelow Station; Regenesis

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For no apparent reason, a month or two ago I found myself picking up Cyteen by C.J. Cherryh, which I’d read in college, found gripping and completely incomprehensible, and never reread. This sent me on a Cherryh spree that I pulled myself out of only because I had (and still have) a lot of reading to do for Readercon.

Anyway, for the sake of time I’m not going to put a lot of effort into summarizing the books I read, which were Cyteen; 40,000 in Gehenna; Downbelow Station; and Regenesis: two of these are Hugo Award winners, Cherryh is a major author, there’s lots of reviews and summaries out there.

Cyteen made a lot more sense this time around, though I did immediately have to reread it to determine whether it was just me, or whether a couple of key characters were in fact genuinely inscrutable or got their characterization too late in the game. (I think it was the latter.) I understand why people bounce off (1) the opening in-universe textbook excerpt and (2) the first third of the novel, but I loved both of them and wouldn’t suggest anyone skip them. The first of those is perhaps the more unusual: I do love an in-universe document generally, but I think I must click with Cherryh’s prose particularly well, to say "hell yeah, here we go" upon opening a novel to:

Verbal Text from:
THE HUMANE REVOLUTION
“The Company Wars”: #1
Reseune Educational Publications: 4668-1368-1
approved for 80+

Imagine all the variety of the human species confined to a single world, a world sown with the petrified bones of human ancestors, a planet dotted with the ruins of ten thousand years of forgotten human civilizations—a planet on which at the time human beings first flew in space, humans still hunted a surplus of animals, gathered wild plants, farmed with ancient methods, spun natural yarns by hand and cooked over wood fires.

And while the first third is a horror show because it’s got Ari I in full swing, that’s why it’s important—a book that’s about recreating Ari I needs to have that perspective in it.

Anyway, this doesn’t hold up quite as well upon a close second read because of the characterization stuff I mentioned before, but it is very close to brilliant, I think: it’s remarkably wide in scope and ambitious as well as being intensely claustrophobic, which is a good trick. The density, hothouse atmosphere, unreliability, and deeply fucked up abusive relationships all remind me of the Locked Tomb, if that’s useful, though its narrative voice is nowhere near as distinctive.

Of course one of the things about Cyteen is that Ari I is extremely wrong about at least one thing that the reader can determine: true brilliance does not mean that literally every other person in the universe is incapable of understanding you. This is both deeply anti-scientific of her [*] and typical of her arrogance—an arrogance that is enabled and encouraged by Union society, to be fair. Between knowing that she’s demonstrably fallible, and the way Cyteen is haunted by whatever happened on the planet Gehenna, 40,000 in Gehenna was the obvious thing for me to pick up next.

[*] Chad literally wrote a whole book about this!

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And 40,000 is just a really great book, more successful than Cyteen in my opinion. It was actually written before Cyteen, and I’d love to know what it was like reading them in that order! But it’s hard to talk about because I’m not sure what constitutes a spoiler for it. There is what you get in Cyteen, which is that Union landed 40,000 colonists, mostly azi, on a planet and deliberately abandoned them there in order to deny the planet to Alliance. During Cyteen, it becomes a political crisis because Alliance has now found the planet and determined that the colonists had "devolved into a primitive lifestyle." I guess I can say that the book spans about two hundred years, with time jumps of varying lengths, and that in places it gives me Steerswoman vibes (or the other way around given the timing, though I don’t know if Kirstein has talked about Cherryh as an influence). I think my only critique is that there’s some gender stuff that feels maybe a smidge on the nose? But on the whole it’s an impressive and enjoyable book and a great showcase of Cherryh’s range, especially back-to-back with Cyteen.

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Next I read Downbelow Station, which is set during the Alliance-Union war and is told from the POVs of various Alliance characters. Cherryh says, in the introduction to the 20th anniversary edition, that in order to keep the book’s size down she "took out all the transitional and descriptive bits in a final edit." Don Wollheim sent it right back to her to put them back in, Betsy Wollheim added in the scene headings, and "DAW created a new size category to make it possible to publish the book uncut"—does anyone know what that means? Anyway, good editing, Wollheims; so much of the tension of the book comes from seeing this entire fragile space station from so many perspectives and really understanding what’s at stake.

This book is a little more morally simplistic than the others here, which mostly was a relief, honestly—characters who both mean well and have some ability to do well! Unfortunately, it does result in a somewhat stereotypical "primitive friendly native" depiction of the hisa, the species indigenous to the planet that Downbelow orbits. I’m told they get developed more in Finity’s End, and I very much wanted to dive into that and the rest of the Company Wars books after finishing Downbelow.

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Unfortunately, as mentioned above, Readercon calls, so I turned to Regenesis as a way of easing myself out of this Cherryh binge. This is the many-years-later sequel to Cyteen, which I expected to be disappointing based on the unanimous reactions of my friends, and I was correct. Its solution to "who murdered Ari I?" is so uninteresting that I reject that reality and substitute my own (actually Jo Walton’s final suggestion in this post). On the personal level it’s mostly Ari II trampling every boundary she sees, in ways that I’m uncomfortably unsure whether the narrative disapproves of, and on the plot level it’s all internal Union political maneuvering and no sociogenesis. I genuinely cannot recommend it no matter how much one wants to know what happens after Cyteen. (And on the strength of four whole books, I’m prepared to boldly declare that 40,000 is what happens, in all the ways that matter.)

Ending on Regenesis did have me tempted to read just one more! to finish on a stronger note, but I managed to not eat that potato chip, and I look forward to getting back to these books soon-ish!

I’ve put up a spoiler post mostly for gossiping about the characters.

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Cherryh, C.J.: Cyteen; 40,000 in Gehenna; Downbelow Station; Regenesis (spoiler post)

This is the spoiler post for Cyteen; 40,000 in Gehenna; Downbelow Station; and Regenesis. The non-spoiler post is here.

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Cyteen

The characterization bits I referred to in the main post: it’s impossible to tell what’s up with Jordan with what we have here (does he have a genuine professional dispute with Ari I? is it just the tug-of-war over Justin? both?); and the key bits about Denis’s personality coming in so late in the book ends up being tell-not-show in a sub-optimal way.

My reread notes to myself include “Ari II is in fact also very creepy”—and that’s before I read Regenesis!

(Also I know life is a rich tapestry but I was not remotely so horny as a just-menstruating child, my god.)

Two more things, of vastly differing scale.

First: Worms in the tapes is the first-order fear when it comes to this kind of thing—see Mikhail Corain’s opening POV section—and yet the fact that Ari I has already done it, and not just to the Gehenna azi, seems almost undersold in the book!

Second: does Ari II get the equivalent of a mood ring for her birthday?

And Dr. Edwards’, then, which was a piece of gold plastic until you put your fingers on it or laid something like a pencil on it, and then it made the shadow in different colors according to how warm it was, and you could make designs with it that stayed a while.

40,000 in Gehenna (but also Cyteen, again)

I can’t tell whether we’re supposed to find the calibans’ sentience a surprise or not.

I was initially resistant to the idea that Ari I’s hidden imperative to the azi made any difference at all, because of how thoroughly Jin 458’s descendants do not listen to him, but a friend points out that the weirds seem to be wholly azi-descended. So I think this has to say more about my knee-jerk reflexes around parenting than anything else.

But I think that Gehenna does show that Ari’s wrong in a more fundamental way: Ari I put all this work into deep-sets—CIT deep-sets—because she thought that humanity needs to be united at that level, lest it diverge into lots of little groups that will be in constant conflict. Yet Gehenna diverges radically from galactic society and, in the tantalizing final section of 40,000, are back in that society with apparent benefits to all.

(I can’t believe it took me until now, thinking about how the onlooker calls the caliban a dragon, to wonder if these were also in response to Pern.)

Downbelow Station

For some reason, I have no idea why, I was immediately afraid that Elene was going to play an unpleasant structural role. So I cheered extra hard when she came in with the merchanter’s alliance. (The overall Quen-Konstantin-Talley situation was quite juicy and I hope Josh can come back sometime.)

…and I’m running out of steam and don’t have anything else to say about this right now.

Regenesis

It’s minor, but even with how self-absorbed Ari is, I find it hard to believe that she thinks her successor will need Giraud Nye that much.

Ari in her impenetrable tower, with everyone she cares about around her (nevermind asking them first)!!!

The reason I’m not sure that the narrative disapproves is that it goes easy on Union overall. All the clear horrors of this book are in the past (the treatment of azi soldiers) or mustache-twirling obvious bad guys (Defense). Meanwhile Ari I insisted that azi are not supposed to be a perpetual convenience … which they certainly are on Reseune … and Eversnow is explicitly pitched by Yanni as a reason to keep up the demand for azi, thereby maintaining Reseune’s hold on power … to which Ari II makes no objection.

Gah. Gah, I say.

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Pratchett, Terry: (29) Night Watch (reread, 2024)

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With my head still full of Les Misérables, it occurred to me that I could reread Terry Pratchett’s Night Watch, which in retrospect was definitely a Les Mis riff that I hadn’t known to recognize any of the prior times I read it.

Actually, it turns out that this is the antiLes Mis. I’d noted before that it does not believe in revolutions. But I hadn’t been able to register before that the idealist who wants to declare a People’s Republic, Reg Shoe, is absolutely an Enjolras stand-in (somewhat unfairly, as neither he nor Hugo was into redistribution of wealth). Poor Reg is also the comic relief and only achieves dignity in defeat.

In addition, the dogged cop is Vimes, not Javert (and it is so disorienting to read this from a cop’s perspective) and the elusive criminal is Carcer (a gleefully unrepentant murderer), not Jean Valjean. And one of the evil torturers has invented "craniometrics," which it’s hard not to see as a (justified) jab at Hugo’s belief in phrenology.

Finally, there are still not enough female characters, but at least those that are present have motivations other than romantic love, and sex work is morally neutral.

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Hugo, Victor: Les Misérables (tr. Christine Donougher)

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I began reading Victor Hugo’s Les Misérables at the very start of 2023. I can date this relatively precisely because I’d signed up for a newsletter that sent out one chapter per day, starting January 1—there being 365 chapters of The Brick, as it is known to fans. I don’t know if I immediately started reading on New Year’s Day, but I had caught up by January 4, which is when I started posting to Tumblr about it (here’s all my non-reblog posts).

I kept up with it for a little bit, but rapidly discovered that it worked better if I read in large chunks. [*] So I read Part One in February, Part Two in April … and then Part Three in December, when I barely remembered anything that had happened previously. (I had tried it in the summer, but with no success.) I got through Part Four also in December, with some hopes of finishing the book on the original schedule, that is, within the calendar year. When that didn’t happen—I finished the sewer digression on December 31—I ultimately decided to reread the whole thing from the start before pushing through to the end.

[*] Having spent my formative years reading one or more complete books per day, I have yet to figure out how to read something new-to-me slowly over long periods of time. This is one reason why my novel reading has dropped so precipitously.

This turned out to be a very good call, because wow, it was though I’d never actually read Part Three, the way it seemed completely new on reread. Also, I’d switched to the Christine Donougher translation after my friend ellen_fremedon said that it rendered Hugo’s arguments "remarkably transparent." And I definitely understood what he was getting at much better this time around, though it’s also possible that I’d finally internalized the various relevant points of French history. (It is truly embarrassing how often I stopped in my first reading and said, wait, what does Hugo think of, e.g., Napoleon?)

So I spent a very intense *mumble* days doing almost nothing but (re)reading Les Mis, finishing earlier this week. It’s such a relief to be done! 2023 was the year I had giant novels hovering over me: nominally, I was reading this; rereading Moby-Dick (which I’d read in December 2022) along with Whale Weekly; and rereading Heaven Official’s Blessing on Mastodon (though that only started in the summer). [**] The key word there is of course "nominally," though I have hopes of going back to Whale Weekly now.

[**] Heaven Official’s Blessing (Tian Guan Ci Fu or TGCF) is an enormously long Chinese webnovel by Mo Xiang Tong Xiu that I’d read, twice, in 2021; the eight-volume official English translation has recently completed. It has eaten my brain as much as The Locked Tomb series has, not that you’d know either of those things from this booklog because I haven’t been updating consistently. I do hope to write up both eventually.

As for the reading experience, I should say first that I was in the somewhat-rare position of being basically unspoiled for the story. Somehow my knowledge amounted to: (1) there was a group of young revolutionaries on a barricade: two of them were consistently paired by the fandom, and I was pretty sure they all died?; (2) someone stole a loaf of bread; and (3) Russell Crowe was a cop who couldn’t sing. Seriously, that was it.

Fittingly, that was a lot of preface. What did I think of the book?

I have mixed feelings. Hugo is trying to do at least two things: tell a deeply dramatic and sentimental story about Jean Valjean (the aforementioned bread-stealer) and a relatively small group of people who keep crossing his path; and convince the French people to overthrow Napoleon III so that he, Hugo, can return from political exile. And the latter is not always of particular interest to me.

It’s not that I object, as a general matter, to the digressions that are the most obvious manifestation of the political purpose. I absolutely adore Moby-Dick, after all. (It is truly wild reading these two books in proximity, by the way; they are both long, digressive, heavily symbolic mid-19th c. novels with strongly-present narrators and clear political messages, but they could not feel more different to me.) And I think there ended up being only one digression in Les Mis that I could not understand the purpose of, the rant about monasteries. I don’t think the rest are skippable: for instance, we need to spend the first fourteen chapters with the Bishop of Digne so that we believe his interactions with Jean Valjean thereafter. (Even though Hugo says—in the very second paragraph of the book!—that a particular fact "in no way impinges on the basic substance of what we are about to relate," which is a truly bold way to start your honking enormous novel.) And I was delighted by the infamous sewer digression—Hugo just has so many feelings about it!

But seeing what role a digression is playing doesn’t equate to enjoying its presence. For instance, the Waterloo section may be even more infamous than the sewer one. I admit, it does start out by very effectively conveying the horror of the battle. But it then devolves into propaganda: and while I can intellectually appreciate Hugo’s attempt to turn Waterloo into a victory for France, I’m simply not the audience for it—or for extensive panegyrics to France’s greatness, or very long navel-gazing on the difference between riot and insurrection, or minutely-detailed odes to a Paris that is no more.

Talking about the digressions may give the wrong impression: the Jean Valjean drama and the revolutionary exhortations can’t be separated from each other. The plot is also in service to the political message. Which means that through the whole book, I wanted to tell Hugo, "I see what you’re doing there." It’s all very constructed. A lot of the time this works! Once, a character feels a time-sensitive obligation that they desperately do not want to fulfill, and Hugo just keeps piling on obstacle and reprieve, obstacle and reprieve, over and over again in this amazing extended sequence. Is it remotely plausible? Probably not. However, I don’t care because it fits with the character and makes for highly compelling reading.

But sometimes the constructed nature doesn’t work. For instance, there was one sequence at the barricade that was supposed to be very tense and moving, but instead it felt like an idiot plot, so I got annoyed at the failed emotional manipulation. And more generally, if I’m always seeing what the author is doing, then I’m failing to be immersed in the story. Sometimes what the author was doing were surprisingly telling bits of characterization, or tense scenes of suspense, or quite funny jokes, or movingly sad parts. But the feeling of edifice was inescapable.

The other reason I have mixed feelings is that Hugo is absolutely awful when it comes to women in this book. He consistently and vociferously argues that their highest happiness consists of entirely subordinating themselves to the man in their life. I very nearly threw my ereader at the wall when I got to this paragraph about a man being "contentedly blind" in the care of his sister:

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Incidentally, let us say that on this earth where nothing is perfect, to be blind and to be loved is in fact one of the most strangely exquisite forms of happiness. To have continually at your side a wife, a daughter, a sister, a delightful human being who is there because you need her and because she cannot do without you, to know you are indispensable to a person who is necessary to you, to be able constantly to measure her affection by how much of her presence she grants you and to say to yourself, ‘Since she devotes all of her time to me, I must have all of her love’; to see the mind though you cannot see the face, to be able to count on the loyalty of one person when the world is eclipsed; to perceive in the rustle of a gown the fluttering of wings, to hear her to-ing and fro-ing, going out, coming home, talking, singing, and to think that you are at the centre of these footsteps, of this talking and singing; to demonstrate at every moment your own magnetic power, to feel all the more powerful the more infirm you are, to become in the darkness and by means of the darkness the star round which this angel gravitates — few joys equal this….

He also spends so much time talking about virginity, virtue, and beauty as interchangeable—while leering at the beautiful virtuous virgins and talking about their irresistible wiles. It truly made my skin crawl. When these particular obsessions haven’t been tripped, he’s capable of characterizing the female characters just as well as the male; but unfortunately they get tripped regularly, and indeed key bits of the plot depend on it. So it, too, is inescapable.

To sum up: I’m glad I read it, and I enjoyed parts of it. I’m looking forward to seeing the musical in a couple months, because I find adaptations interesting, and I’ll keep an eye on the fandom. But I can’t say that I liked it, and I have no desire to read more Hugo.

A spoiler post follows.

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Hugo, Victor: Les Misérables (tr. Christine Donougher) (SPOILERS)

This is the spoiler post for Les Misérables, in which I talk about the ending, the characters, and whatever else comes to mind as I browse my ebook notes. Here’s the non-spoiler post if you haven’t read the book and/or would like something marginally more coherent.

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