{"id":466,"date":"2006-10-29T17:16:52","date_gmt":"2006-10-29T17:16:52","guid":{"rendered":"http:\/\/steelypips.org\/weblog-test\/?p=466"},"modified":"2024-02-23T21:17:59","modified_gmt":"2024-02-24T02:17:59","slug":"november_sharyn","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/steelypips.org\/weblog\/2006\/10\/november_sharyn\/","title":{"rendered":"November, Sharyn, ed., <cite>Firebirds<\/cite>"},"content":{"rendered":"<p>I have a tentative thesis after reading <strong><cite>Firebirds<\/cite>, an anthology edited by Sharyn November<\/strong> that&#8217;s made up of original fantasy and science fiction and meant for a YA audience: one of the main failure modes of short fiction is didacticism. That is, when a short story doesn&#8217;t work, my reaction tends to be &#8220;Oh look, A Message&#8221; or, less often, &#8220;oh look, a story where nothing happens.&#8221; I don&#8217;t know if YA stories are more prone to didacticism than others, but a number of the stories in <cite>Firebirds<\/cite> that didn&#8217;t quite work for me also seemed to have A Message. To be clear, the existence of the didacticism isn&#8217;t usually why the stories don&#8217;t work for me; it&#8217;s that the characters, plot, or prose didn&#8217;t grab me enough to outweigh the didacticism.<\/p>\n<p>I don&#8217;t have much to say about the stories that weren&#8217;t bad, but didn&#8217;t grab me, and also seemed to have something of A Message, so I&#8217;ll just list them with brief descriptions:<\/p>\n<ul>\n<li style=\"margin-bottom: 1em\">&#8220;Cotillion,&#8221; by Delia Sherman, is a &#8220;Tam Lin&#8221; variant set in late 1960s New York City.<\/li>\n<li style=\"margin-bottom: 1em\">&#8220;Mariposa,&#8221; by Nancy Springer. &#8220;&#8216;I&#8217;ve lost my soul?&#8217;&nbsp;.&nbsp;.&nbsp;. The doctor nodded. &#8216;I think so. Probably in early adolesence. It happens more commonly than you might think.'&#8221;<\/li>\n<li style=\"margin-bottom: 1em\">&#8220;Medusa,&#8221; by Michael Cadnun, is pretty much what the title says.<\/li>\n<li style=\"margin-bottom: 1em\">&#8220;Chasing the Wind,&#8221; by Elizabeth E. Wein, is set in 1950 Africa with no apparent sf or fantasy content.<\/li>\n<li style=\"margin-bottom: 1em\">&#8220;Remember Me,&#8221; by Nancy Farmer, is a changeling story.<\/li>\n<li style=\"margin-bottom: 1em\">&#8220;Flotsam,&#8221; by Nina Kiriki Hoffman, is about various people who are lost&mdash;between worlds, in grief&mdash;and help each other become found.<\/li>\n<\/ul>\n<p>Laurel Winter&#8217;s &#8220;The Flying Woman&#8221; doesn&#8217;t have quite as explicit a message as the stories above, but something about its tone failed to grab me. Then there are two odd, dark stories, which have compelling images though I don&#8217;t exactly like them, Lloyd Alexander&#8217;s &#8220;Max Mondrosch&#8221; and Garth Nix&#8217;s &#8220;Hope Chest.&#8221;<\/p>\n<p>Diana Wynne Jones&#8217; &#8220;Little Dot&#8221; is a cat story. If you don&#8217;t like cats, it will have no appeal for you whatsoever; and even to me, it feels more like an excuse to tell cute cat anecdotes than an actual story. In contrast, Sherwood Smith&#8217;s &#8220;Beauty&#8221; is an actual story, one I rather like, but I suspect that its effectiveness is limited to those who&#8217;ve read <a href=\"http:\/\/www.steelypips.org\/weblog\/2005\/03\/smith_sherwood_6.php\"><cite>Crown Duel<\/cite><\/a>. (Chad&#8217;s reaction is consistent with this suspicion.)<\/p>\n<p>Then we have two feminist retellings of fairy tales, &#8220;The Fall of Ys&#8221; by Meredith Ann Pierce and &#8220;The Lady of the Ice Garden&#8221; by Kara Dalkey, both of which effectively evoke the mythic feel of the original tales even as they rewrite them.<\/p>\n<p>Finally, my three favorite stories in the collection. I&#8217;ve already written about Emma Bull and Charles Vess&#8217;s &#8220;The Black Fox&#8221; in talking about <a href=\"http:\/\/www.steelypips.org\/weblog\/2006\/08\/vess_ballads.php\">Vess&#8217;s collection <cite>Book of Ballads<\/cite><\/a>, so I&#8217;ll steal what I wrote there:<\/p>\n<blockquote>\n<p>This is actually a recent (1974) ballad by Graham Pratt, based on a fragment of a Yorkshire folktale; it tells of a fox hunt that&#8217;s not finding any foxes, until someone injudiciously remarks that they&#8217;d chase the Devil himself if he appeared. Out pops a black fox, and the chase is on. I like this one because in its sixteen pages, it has vivid characters, humor, sense of wonder, and an interesting little twist on the ballad. To my mind it&#8217;s the most satisfactory as a standalone story; the tension with the ballad is a bonus.<\/p>\n<\/blockquote>\n<p>Megan Whalen Turner&#8217;s &#8220;The Baby in the Night Deposit Box&#8221; also has a good bit of humor. Someone takes a small-town bank&#8217;s new slogan, &#8220;Your treasure will be safe with us,&#8221; quite seriously, and leaves the baby of the title in the bank&#8217;s custody. The tone is perfectly charming and makes me smile every time I think of it.<\/p>\n<p>The tone of Patricia A. McKillip&#8217;s &#8220;Byndley&#8221; is perfectly elegant&mdash;well, almost. It&#8217;s the tale of a wizard who stole something from the Queen of Faerie and now is trying to return it. It&#8217;s a really gorgeous story, vivid and dreamlike at once, and it&#8217;s probably only me who thinks that the last two lines of dialogue clunk inexplicably. Regardless, it&#8217;s very much worth reading.<\/p>\n<p>By my standards, that&#8217;s a pretty good batting average for a collection. I have the next one, <cite>Firebirds Rising<\/cite>, in the to-be-read bookcase and look forward to it.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>I have a tentative thesis after reading Firebirds, an anthology edited by Sharyn November that&#8217;s made up of original fantasy and science fiction and meant for a YA audience: one of the main failure modes of short fiction is didacticism. That is, when a short story doesn&#8217;t work, my reaction tends to be &#8220;Oh look, &hellip; <\/p>\n<p class=\"link-more\"><a href=\"https:\/\/steelypips.org\/weblog\/2006\/10\/november_sharyn\/\" class=\"more-link\">Continue reading<span class=\"screen-reader-text\"> &#8220;November, Sharyn, ed., <cite>Firebirds<\/cite>&#8220;<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"closed","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[58,15,117],"tags":[127,148,152,184,209,243,258,315,333,334,346,381,391,395,417,423,429,444],"class_list":["post-466","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-crown-duel-universe","category-sf-and-fantasy","category-short-fiction","tag-alexander-lloyd","tag-bull-emma","tag-cadnun-michael","tag-dalkey-kara","tag-farmer-nancy","tag-hoffman-nina-kiriki","tag-jones-diana-wynne","tag-mckillip-patricia-a","tag-nix-garth","tag-november-sharyn","tag-pierce-meredith-ann","tag-sherman-delia","tag-smith-sherwood","tag-springer-nancy","tag-turner-megan-whalen","tag-vess-charles","tag-wein-elizabeth-e","tag-winter-laurel"],"jetpack_featured_media_url":"","_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/steelypips.org\/weblog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/466","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/steelypips.org\/weblog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/steelypips.org\/weblog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/steelypips.org\/weblog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/steelypips.org\/weblog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=466"}],"version-history":[{"count":1,"href":"https:\/\/steelypips.org\/weblog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/466\/revisions"}],"predecessor-version":[{"id":2859,"href":"https:\/\/steelypips.org\/weblog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/466\/revisions\/2859"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/steelypips.org\/weblog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=466"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/steelypips.org\/weblog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=466"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/steelypips.org\/weblog\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=466"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}