Hughart, Barry: (01-03) Bridge of Birds, Story of the Stone, Eight Skilled Gentlemen

Last time I read a Barry Hughart novel, I theorized that the later books were darker than the first, which was one reason I liked them less (in addition to the standard plot pattern having become obvious by that point). Re-reading all three bears that out.

The last and my least favorite, Eight Skilled Gentlemen, is not only darkest—structured around a series of gruesome murders and with little in the way of interesting characters or humorous touches—but the clumsiest, with the inexplicable additional property of the cages and the character who is introduced at very nearly the last moment.

Story of the Stone still has a great deal of charm, as I said in my last reading of it, but Bridge of Birds is still by far the best of them, with recurring jokes (“What have you done with my X?!”), a wider cast of characters, and a sweeter and more joyous leap into the mythic. I’m sorry that I won’t get to see the end Hughart had in mind for the characters, but if the books were going to continue in this pattern, I don’t regret missing the books along the way.

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Robb, J.D.: (27) Salvation in Death

From the library, more light reading, the latest Eve Dallas novel by J.D. Robb, Salvation in Death. A priest drops dead during a funeral Mass, and it turns out that someone’s put cyanide in the sacramental wine.

This turns out to be a type of story that I’d been wanting Robb to write (series spoilers, ROT-13: jurer n zna vf gur bar gb chyy gur ernyyl ybat-enatr pba (pbzcner Fgenatref)), but I’m not convinced by the portrait of the central character, which is what the entire book revolves around. It was probably pushing plausibility anyway, but I felt that Robb threw in one detail too many, which resulted in a muddled and contradictory whole.

Eve and Roarke’s past traumas are also stirred up by events of this book, after taking a back seat for a bit in the series. I’ve sometimes been unsatisfied with how these have been handled in the past, so I should note that I thought it worked pretty well here.

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Wilks, Eileen: (04) Night Season

More light reading/finishing four-book series that I started a while ago, with Eileen Wilks’ Night Season. I’d put off reading this because it focused on Cynna Weaver and I was unhappy with how the last book, Blood Lines, had treated her.

Unfortunately I didn’t think this book was an improvement in that regard, and for some reason—maybe just the sleep deprivation—I slid right off the worldbuilding in this book, too. (It doesn’t help that the book is structured as a Quest for the Plot Token.) So, unless the next book is a dramatic improvement, I suspect I’ll be dropping this series.

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Chase, Loretta: (104) Not Quite a Lady

A little light reading, Loretta Chase’s Not Quite a Lady, fourth and last in her Carsington Brothers series. Lady Charlotte Hayward is beautiful, rich, twenty-seven, and unmarried: a deeply improbable combination that she takes some pains to unobtrusively perpetuate, because she fears the revelation of the fact that she is not a virgin. But Darius Carsington, the scientifically-minded youngest Carsington brother, has taken over management of the property next door and is fascinated by her contradictions.

This is a sweet story of two people finding someone that they can be most fully themselves with. I would rank it probably just below Miss Wonderful; it’s more interesting than Lord Perfect, but the ending strikes me as improbably happy. All the same, it was an enjoyable way to pass a couple of hours and a decent way to round off the series.

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Shippey, Tom: Road to Middle-earth, The: How J.R.R. Tolkien Created a New Mythology

Some time ago, I started a chapter-by-chapter re-read of The Lord of the Rings, supplemented by reading works of criticism. Tom Shippey’s The Road to Middle-earth: How J.R.R. Tolkien Created a New Mythology was highly recommended for this project, and I dutifully bought it . . . and left it sitting on the shelf when my re-read stalled out seven chapters in.

I’m gearing up to resume the re-read, and started with Road. Because I was reading to gain insight into The Lord of the Rings, I found the first couple of chapters somewhat rough going. In brief, Shippey’s thesis is that the foundation of Tolkien’s fiction is his deep attachment to philology, or the comparitive study of languages to understand their evolution: this instilled twin awarenesses of continuing history and continuing linguistic change and gave him a vehicle to create a mythology for England. Which is fine, though the languages are the aspect of Middle-earth that I’m least interested in (well, after the calendars). But it takes most of the first chapter to even arrive at a definition of philology—after, of course, the apparently-obligatory discussion of LotR‘s poor critical reception. And then chapter two traces the early roots of Tolkien’s interest in philology and English myth, down to a two-page attempt to identify a Roman road referred to in a poem by, not Tolkein, but his friend.

I did a lot of skimming of the first two chapters, in other words. I’m just not the audience for them.

My patience was rewarded when the book began to analyze the fiction set in Middle-earth. The chapter on The Hobbit is both interesting in its own right and has useful observations applicable to LotR, such as how Tolkien’s portrayal of elves and dwarves attempted to synthesize their varied mythological characteristics.

For my purposes, the meat of the book is the three chapters on LotR, which I found helpful. Some of the points were the “oh, of course” types that crystalize things that I’d recognized but never articulated, while others stemmed from history or literature that I wasn’t familiar with. For instance, I didn’t know that the Riders of Rohan were almost identical to the Anglo-Saxons, with the exceptions of having horses and not having religion. And while I’d vaguely recognized that religious observances are oddly absent from LotR, I hadn’t understood that was because Tolkien was attempting to preserve the characters’ status as virtuous pre-Christian pagans.

The most useful piece of crystalizing analysis was a broad synthesis of theme, structure, and style. Here’s my attempt at summarizing: the portrayal of good and evil, and the book’s interlaced plot structure, heighten tension and provide an opportunity to dramatize a theory of virtue, particularly courage. For instance, the nature of evil is deliberately ambiguous, between the orthodox Christian view that evil has no independent existence but is simply the absence of good, and the Manichaean heresy that good and evil are equal and the universe is a battlefield between them (e.g., the Ring can be read as either a “psychic amplifier” or a “sentient creature”). This ambiguity heightens tension by making characters’ decisions more complicated. Supernatural good, conversely, is portrayed more weakly as luck or chance, which has a similar tension-heightening effect, but also preserves a space for characters to make decisions and exercise free will. And the interlaced structure of The Two Towers and The Return of the King does three things: allows for surprise and cliffhangers; gives readers a bigger picture that suggests an underlying structure or sense to events; but requires characters to make decisions based on incomplete information, to the same effect as the portrayal of good. These efforts are supported by the book’s style, which uses the hobbits as a bridge between modern expectations and the book’s mythical and romantic aspects (in the terminology of The Anatomy of Criticism).

I doubt this summary does the argument justice, but I did find it a useful illumination of aspects of the book I’d noticed but not fully articulated to myself.

Finally, Road discusses The Silmarillion, Tolkien’s non-LotR fiction, and The History of Middle-earth, which are the twelve volumes of drafts and unpublished material edited by Christopher Tolkien. I went back to skimming these, as The Silmarillion makes me cranky and I haven’t read the other works discussed.

In its entirety, this book is not for everyone, but as literary criticism of LotR, I was glad to have read it.

[Cross-posted to my LiveJournal.]

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Pratchett, Terry: Nation

Terry Pratchett’s latest novel, Nation, is a non-Discworld fantasy. Set on an island in the Great Pelagic Ocean (a slightly alternate version of the Pacific) in the 19th century, it opens with a tsunami that kills every member of The Nation but one [*], a teenage boy named Mau, and shipwrecks an English girl called Daphne (née Ermintrude). Together, they begin to rebuild The Nation.

[*] Pratchet’s YA novels tend to be much darker than his “adult” ones. I think I only laughed in two places in this book, both quite late; and the more serious tone makes the handful of footnotes a rather awkward fit.

I thoroughly enjoyed this. I thought the portrayal of the tsunami and its aftermath was one of Pratchett’s more effective pieces of writing, and of course I’m a sucker for building-civilization type stories. This book reminds me somewhat of The Bromeliad in this respect, and indeed most of its themes are familiar ones in Pratchett’s work: science, faith, community, monsters (the human kind), and so forth. But because Pratchett is writing so close to the real world this time, the book is working in much more difficult territory. I’d like to offer a searching analysis of how the novel negotiates this, but I can’t. While I think it avoids the most obvious pitfalls, I so enjoyed the characters and what happen to them that I have a hard time bringing my analytic facilities to bear. About the only criticism I can muster is that I wonder if the Epilogue isn’t a little too perfect: it makes me look back at the way that perfection was achieved and see the seams in its construction.

(Spoilers, ROT-13: gur arprffnel ryrzrag vf qncuar’f sngure orpbzvat xvat, juvpu bayl unccraf orpnhfr bs gur vasyhramn, ohg gung genhzn vf oneryl zragvbarq nsgre gur bcravat. vs jr’q frra gur ratyvfu punenpgref tevrir bire fcrpvsvp qrnguf, be rira gnyx nobhg gur qvssvphyg gvzrf nurnq tvira gur uhtr cbchyngvba ybffrf, gur syh jbhyq unir sryg yrff yvxr n cybg pbairavrapr gb zr.)

After the recent distressing news about Pratchett’s health, I don’t know whether to expect more novels from him. But I’m very glad to have this one.

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de Camp, L. Sprague: Lest Darkness Fall

I’d been vaguely meaning to read L. Sprague de Camp’s Lest Darkness Fall for a while, and Jo Walton’s post about it on Tor.com brought it back to mind. It’s a very short book and seemed like moderately light reading.

My opinion of it is much closer to Chad’s than Jo’s: some good bits, but too much of its time for me to really get into. As Chad notes, the characterization is thin at best (particularly, I think, of the women); I also had the sense that the political plot would have worked much better if I knew more history. And a really egregious bit of Eurocentrism at the end left a bad taste in my mouth.

I do like the technical, rather than political, aspects of the book (minor spoiler, ROT13: V jnf fhecevfrq naq cyrnfrq gung ur qvqa’g trg thacbjqre jbexvat), in the same way that I liked the nonfiction Engineering in the Ancient World. If that’s your kind of thing, you might just stick to the first half of the book, which I probably should have done.

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Sears, William, Martha Sears, and Linda Hughey Holt, Pregnancy Book, The; Penny Simkin, Janet Whalley, and Ann Keppler, Pregnancy, Childbirth, and the Newborn

I read two reference books during my pregnancy, The Pregnancy Book, by William Sears, Martha Sears, and Linda Hughey Holt, and Pregnancy, Childbirth, and the Newborn, by Penny Simkin, Janet Whalley, and Ann Keppler. Both were recommended by the ever-helpful Rivka, who saved me from browsing through the vast array of pregnancy books and, very likely, having a meltdown.

The Pregnancy Book is a month-by-month discussion of maternal emotional and physical changes, fetal development, and family concerns. Any chronological breakdown of pregnancy is going to be imprecise, and so occasionally I’d find that a later chapter addressed an issue I’d experienced (I went through phases when I was reluctant to read ahead). Overall I found its tone reassuringly matter-of-fact and helpful.

Since the Searses have another book specifically on birth (called, of course, The Birth Book), The Pregnancy Book has relatively little detail on labor and delivery. Since for various reasons we chose not to attend a childbirth class, and the library’s Lamaze DVD was approximately twenty years old and quite horrible, Pregnancy, Childbirth, and the Newborn was a great relief. It is considerably more medical than The Pregnancy Book, with much detail on medications, interventions, terminology, and so forth. I found the sections I’d read useful, and if I’d not superstitiously avoided the chapter on Cesarean sections, that would have been useful too.

A note on diversity: I hadn’t realized that all of the sketches in The Pregnancy Book portrayed people who were not obviously non-white, until I opened Pregnancy, Childbirth, and the Newborn and saw photographs of non-white people. I did think, while reading The Pregnancy Book, that occasionally it assumed a middle- or upper-class reader; if Pregnancy, Childbirth, and the Newborn had class biases, I didn’t notice them in the sections I read.

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Scalia, Antonin, and Bryan A. Garner, Making Your Case: The Art of Persuading Judges

On my suggestion, the local library system ordered Making Your Case: The Art of Persuading Judges, by Antonin Scalia and Bryan A. Garner . . . and I only got around to checking it out now. Hey, I’ve been busy.

This is a compact, readable distillation of advice on legal reasoning, brief writing, and oral argument. I didn’t find anything new in it, but it was a nice refresher, and I think it would be a fine overview for new attorneys.

The other thing of note is when Scalia and Garner disagree, which they do four times, over whether to use contractions in briefs, to put citations in footnotes, to put substantive discussion in footnotes, and to use “he” as a unisex pronoun. The remarkable thing is that I agree with Scalia on the first three (no, no, and yes), and yet his arguments, especially regarding the fourth and in comparison to the rest of the text, are so remarkably cranky that they nearly make me want to change my mind.

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Pratchett, Terry: (23) Carpe Jugulum

I don’t have much to say about Terry Pratchett’s Carpe Jugulum, which I re-read after Maskerade. My previous review was a little generous, as time has made me less tolerant of the similarity in plot to Lords and Ladies. Other than that, all I have to add is that I’d be curious to know more about Oats, and I still want to know if Pratchett has an end in mind for Granny (and Carrot, and Vimes, but particularly Granny).

(Oh, and a comment about the physical volume, not the book; recent US releases of Pratchett’s novels have been notable for their bad proofreading, but this ten-year-old British edition suggests that Pratchett just has bad luck with copyeditors, or something: in several places, “baby” is rendered “babby” (if that’s dialect, it’s extremely inconsistent), and one of the witches gets called the wrong name at least twice.)

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